Archive for July, 2009

Ms. Goodie Two-Shoes / Mr. Hot Pants

July 31, 2009

Ms. Goodie Two-Shoes writes about Mr. Hot Pants….

Heart thumping, palms moist, she settles her shaky fingers on the keyboard.  Millions of thoughts run through her mind, those that aren’t very good…at least that’s what her momma had told her as a young girl.  Squeezing her eyes closed, pictures of half-dressed men float through her mind and her mouth turns dry.  SEX!  No, it couldn’t be time to write the sex scene, could it?  Her religious leader would certainly kick her out of church for fear of a bolt of lighting spearing down from heaven.  What about her parents?  Would her own husband disown her?  Her poor children would have to walk down the streets with their head ducked from now on.   But she’s a romance writer.  It needs to be written! She swallows the lump of fear lodged in her throat and takes a deep breath.  Once her eyes are open, she focuses on her story.  Reminding herself it’s a natural thing, she proceeds, her fingers fly across the keyboard as if they had a mind of their own.  His masculine scent of leather and spice fills the air, consuming every breath she takes.  In her head, the scene unfolds, the hero sweeps the heroine off into another world where seduction and passion rule.  Seeking fingers, curious kisses… The more she writes, the wider her grin spreads.  Her heart now beats a different rhythm.  Her palms are moist for entirely different reasons this time.  And in her chest…love grows.  This excitement is the thrill she needs –the energy that gives her the courage to continue and not be afraid. 

I don’t know about most writers, but I’ve certainly experienced this a time or two (or three or four) since I first started writing.  Those who don’t read romance stories label us as ‘smut’ writers.  All we think about is sex – twenty-four hours a day.  My husband tells me this numerous times…and it isn’t for flattery. <grin>  But there’s a bigger picture.  The overall picture that nobody sees but romance writers.  We aren’t writing about sex – we’re writing about love. 

HOWEVER…this doesn’t mean I’m not going to have sexual tension in my stories.  In fact, I live for sexual tension.  In one of my critique groups, I’ve been labeled Queen of Sex Scenes.  Even been called LoverLips.  Several of my reviewers call me Queen Of Sexual Tension. Should I be offended?  Heck no!  I’m thrilled!! Don’t tell my husband.  He’ll just roll his eyes again. <snort>

I write Sensual…don’t you just love that word?  It rolls across your tongue like a lover’s passionate kiss.  Makes you want to deepen your voice in a sexy tone, lower your lids half-mast and part your mouth.  Maybe even swipe your tongue across your dry lips… 

Okay, I’m getting carried away again.  I need to get back to the point here.  You can still be a Goodie-Two-Shoes and write about Mr. Hot Pants.  The characters you write about are real to you – and especially to your readers.  Write about your character’s feelings, about their hearts pounding like a tom-tom against their ribs.  Write about sweaty palms, shaky limbs, and out of control breathing.  Write about shivers of delight that cascade over your characters bodies.  Passionate tremors that seem to have a mind of their own…  And write about the glorious moment when your characters come together.  If you feel like religion should be added…then have one of your characters praise God at that point.  But the fact is – these feelings are real!  This is real life!  You’re not writing porn just because you’re writing a sex scene.  You’re writing about love.

And think of the alternative…  You could be writing about murder, killing, and torturing other humans.  <shivers>  Nah, not for me! 

I’ll stick to romance thank you very much!

 

~Vixen Phyllis~

Almost over Vixen Mary Wednesday

July 30, 2009

Wow, I almost missed my day. Let me tell you what I’ve been up to. Giving my web site a little Botox. Yup you heard me correct. I didn’t entirely give my web site a complete make over or plastic surgery. I did however change the background colors, remove some of those damn sunflowers–don’t get me wrong I love sunflowers they were just a little much on every page. And I changed my personal pictures. Doesn’t sound like much.

WRONG! I have a gazillion pages, with excerpts, reviews, biography, etc. etc. etc. updating some information on one page is not a big deal. Changing the color and font color, removing a border and changing pictures–an all day event. Because I have to change at least the color and font color on every one of those gazillion pages.

So paleeessse check it out for me at http://www.marymartinez.com

Please leave a comment to let me know if I succeeded in making it more professional and eye catching. In other words, did the Botox work?

Thanks Mary – chat at you next week!

What I Like Least About Writing – Edits

July 26, 2009

I’ve never  understood authors who not only demand they not have their books edited and the ones who try to have it written into their contracts they don’t have to be.  I hate going through them, but I can’t imagine not having them. My first draft is usually a free flow, getting down the dreams from the night before and telling the story. I go back through it to flesh out the story, look for inconsistencies, add the flavors to it. I go through it again looking for grammatical issues and a fourth time to see what I missed. After that, I’m too close to see anything that might be wrong. I think we all get too close to our stories, after all, they are a part of our own psyche, an adventure through our own minds.

I try to use beta readers — the last one I had spoke about the book as “our” book and told people how we wrote it. I wrote 90,000 words, she read it and looked for inconsistencies. It was not a joint effort.

I had a really good one — my beta for Mistaken Bride was awesome. At first she held back because she said she didn’t want to hurt my feelings. I could care less about my feelings, if something’s wrong and I don’t see it and you don’t tell me I can’t fix it. When she dug in things clicked. Mistaken Bride comes out in February 2010 with Awe-struck and I think it’s pretty solid.

Once you get through the submission process and you get into editing, sorority hazing in college takes a definite back seat. Your editor is NOT your friend. He or she is there to help you polish your book and point out what you missed.  I always appreciate suggestions like Bea made with Jason’s Accord which evolved into Michael’s Flight and what will be third and fourth books in the series. She saw a lump of coal that could be made into a diamond. THAT is a gift and I was very disappointed she wasn’t available to edit Michael’s Flight.

I’ve had a few utterly awful ones. Ones that made me want to find a rock and after hiding under it for awhile throw it. There was the one who blogged about how awful the six books she was editing for the publisher were and how she wished we’d all give up writing. Hey! No one forced you to edit the books, okay. You had a choice.

There was the one who tried to tell me the military aspects of a book were wrong…then the way the Marine Corps F/A-18 pilots were doing their jobs was wrong. I got the dialogue straight from the pilots’ mouths. That was also the editor who at the very end of the second pass told me I used “he and she” too often but didn’t tell me sooner because she didn’t want to. This was the one who sent incredibly insulting and abusive emails to me throughout the entire process. Incredibly nasty comments and a few outright lies that were more to meet her agenda than anything to do with my book. There’s a reason you won’t see me with that publisher again.

I’m pretty compulsive about my research. I do the bulk of it after the first draft. I track down police, federal agents, fire fighters, antique store dealers, reporters and any one else who has a job that pops up in one of my books. I interview them, I ask for written materials, I ask them to review what I’ve written to be factually accurate. For Mistaken Bride I had the pleasure of speaking with the U.S. Marshal’s historian in Washington, D.C. for a few hours to be sure I had a solid perspective on what they did back in the 1860’s. He was also very helpful with my scene at the OK Corral in America’s Hero because Wyatt Earp was a Marshal and I wanted to be sure it was right. I admit, I get touchy when an editor tries to tell me one of these areas isn’t right because I do my homework. If they have other inside information I couldn’t ferret out, they need to tell me because I take as many steps as I can to be sure they are factually accurate. And on that note – a non-psychic doesn’t know what goes on it a psychic’s life.

With five books due out between now and February 2010 (the sixth in that group was released on July 15) I’m looking at 6 months of almost straight editing. I’m hoping I’ll have an edit-break during November so I can do Nano — that’s a favorite month and event because every year for the past 3-4 years I’ve done it and every book has gotten a contractor with a good publisher.

I had quite a chuckle last night over something this editor did — he or she did a global find and replace for certain words and the global set off her comments too! I laughed out loud and thoroughly enjoyed what it produced.  Late at night, after working on it about 5 hours straight I had another giggle-filled moment when the word “well” was highlighted — it was about the well in the village where people get water, not my character saying “well” once too often. While global finds and replaces can be helpful, they sure can mess things up if you don’t look at the exact parameters of it.

I’ve been lucky with some editors who validate a thought I had on a road I wasn’t sure I wanted to go down. My current editor hit that nail on the head in one aspect. I went with soft and easy in a thread and there is no way it would be that nice. Mentioning it — in a polite and friendly way — gave me permission to do what I thought needed to be done in the first place and just didn’t do it. You never know when that off the wall question or comment is going to give you a gem.

 I’ve only had one editor attack me personally through the process and out of all I’ve had, that’s not a bad average. It’s such a pleasure to work with a professional who shares the goal to produce the best book possible. I hate the process. I can’t imagine not having someone there to do it.

Another Vixen Wednesday for Mary

July 22, 2009

You got it, I missed last week. But in my defense I was flying from Salt Lake City, UT to Washington D.C. for the RWA National Conference. By the time I arrived, I had to check in, go to the signing, meet my chapter and yes I’m exhausted just writing it all!

I will recap my experience…. Wonderful! I had opportunities galore. I moderated a workshop for Susan Elisabeth Phillips. Fun and informative workshop. Saturday I helped with the Agent and Editor pitch appointments again a wonderful opportunity. I met several and actually chatted! Hopefully they’ll remember me when I submit.

I brought home too many books as usual, now I need to organize and find a place for them. And also, I’m trying to catch up with everything that slipped by while I was gone. My fingers itch with new ideas, but I can never concentrate if I have something I need to do hanging over my head. So I’m using Benedryl to stop the itch until I can write!

If you ever have the opportunity to attend a writing conference DON’T pass it up!

I’ve got to go! Talk to you next week.

July 21, 2009

Welcome Open Mic Tuesday where you — the author and reader — get a chance to sing about your books and favorites!

Where:  Right here at The Vivacious Vixen blog:  http://vivaciousvixensofromance.com/

  When:    Starting Midnight Tuesday, July 21 through 11:59 PM Tuesday night (July 21).

 What:     Answer our three questions and post 3-4 lines about your book (one book per post). If you wish to run an impromptu contest you can add 2 additional lines about the contest.

 Who:      Authors who want to give us a blurb about their books and Readers who want to sign an author’s praises — yes readers, you too get to have your turn at the Mic.

 How:      Any time after 12:01 Tuesday morning look for our Open Mic post and enter your comment with this post!

Your questions for July 21 are:

Best summer read so far this year

Favorite genre

Favorite character’s name

 Enjoy! We will!

Domestic Violence

July 19, 2009

I debated long and hard before writing this post. In my books I try to offer something of substance that’s positive. For instance in Her Eyes there is a thread regarding organ donation and I have links regarding why this is such an essential gift on my website. Until this week I didn’t think I had taken on domestic violence and I hadn’t. Not as strongly as I could have because mostly I write sweet-sensual romance, even in my romantic suspenses. I just don’t write that gritty. That said, in His Eyes I do take on the subject somewhat and my heroine does find a way past what her ex-husband did to her.

What got me started on this thread was something horrific that happened in my city this week. A few months ago a 9 year old girl was mowed down and killed in a cross walk while walking with her father by a 7 times convicted drunk driver. He flipped off the entire courtroom including the judge in his arraignment. The D.A. is going for a murder charge — our cit is still in mourning.

On the heels of that little girl’s death, last Sunday a young mother was murdered by her ex-boyfriend. He showed up on their daughter’s first birthday with a baseball bat and murdered her in their back yard. Then he took off with the baby. The irony is the police officer who caught him used to work in my city. The defense attorney wants to delay an hearings so emotions calm down. Emotions calm down? The man came into this city and killed a young mother on their child’s first birthday!

When I worked for the police department I took what calls from domestic violence victims. Some wanted restraining orders. Others knew they were merely pieces of paper that meant nothing because if they had to call the police in the first place, a piece of paper wasn’t going to stop the guy the next time. And yes, I know men can be victims of domestic violence too. I saw those cases come across my desk as well.

My paper had some starting results this weekend. Victims don’t want their names knows — justifiably so just in case the suspect comes looking for them, even with new identities.

In my county two of the three homicides were rooted in domestic violence.

In my county 88% of the 4500 cases filed in the past 5 years were for domestic violence.  88%!

Most suspects get off with a misdemeanor plea in family court. They get to go back out in no time at all and do it again. Sadly, it’s still considered a family and not a criminal matter.

Of added note is that 50% of the motor vehicles in my county last year were due to domestic violence.

 In 2008 the local advocacy group took approximatley 2000 calls. That’s an average of 5-1/2 calls a DAY for domestic violence.

It took a woman dying, a young mother’s murder, on her little girl’s first birthday to make the figures public in my county.

Michael’s Flight is about ready to launch!

July 12, 2009

Michael’s Flight, Book 2 of my Descendants of Earth series is scheduled for release on July 15 — a mere 3 days away!

This story is proof positive about just what a good editor can do for an author. My editor on Jason’s Accord, Book 1 of Descendants of Earth, was this amazing woman named Bea. She not only had all her punctuation, grammar and “stuff” down, she was into the story. She didn’t ask antagonizing questions that made it sound like I was stupid — and when I do my research, it’s in the library and totally thorough. I even read books written in the time period I’m writing for the flavor of the language — oh no, she asked REALLY GOOD questions. Thought evoking ones. More than that, she had a thing for Michael La Rosa who is Jason’s best friend. You know the best friend — that secondary character who you usually quickly forget when the hero takes his lady love into the sunset. Well that was Michael, but Bea really like him and he not only got more of a part in Jason’s story, he got one of his own, Michael’s Flight.

While writing Michael’s Flight I “met” two of his friends, Blaise and Stavin who will soon have their own stories. Blaise and Stavin are such opposites yet I wouldn’t mind a happily every after with either one of them. Or Michael. Or Jason <G>

You can check both out at eXtasy Books at www.extasybooks.com

The Man Hunt…still getting great reviews!

July 10, 2009

This past March, my contemporary romance, The Man Hunt, was released with The Wild Rose Press.  It’s still continuing to get great reviews…which is really a relief.  lol

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Well, well, well. This is another one that I have to give snaps to. A Hot, Sexy, romantic story that will weave it’s way into your heart and soul. With characters who are very easy to relate to and fall in love with, it makes this story very well rounded. Very imaginative and well thought out, I had no trouble following along and laughing at a few of the funny things that happen along the way. I really got pulled in by both hero and heroine. I could easily feel the emotions driving them both. This is a great read that I will read again. and again. and………well you get the idea :) Who would have thought that a therapist could be as sexy as Ms. Campbell has made Jordon? And Brock? Well he is just a stud all the way around, no doubt about it. Congrats, Ms. Campbell, I look forward to reading more from you in the future.  At a reasonable $4.50 for 220 pages of total hotness, I found it totally worth every penny! ~~ Seriously Reviewed

Check out the awesome book trailer, too!

 

**excerpt**

 

Doctor Jordan Reed squinted and adjusted her eyes to the dimly lit bar. The Standard Examiner lay opened in front of her as she scanned the advertisement.

Woman seeking man for business partner. Must be charming and witty. Must be between thirty and forty-five and have acting ability. Call 1-800-777-4042 to arrange interview.

“Oh no! Erica, what have you done?”

Jordan focused on the little black letters that practically reached out and slapped her. She slumped forward, banged her forehead on the table, finally letting it come to rest on the opened newspaper. “Why? Why? Why?” she moaned.

Sitting across the table, Erica patted Jordan’s hand. “Don’t be mad at me. It’ll work out. I promise.”

“Oh, God, Erica! This makes me look desperate.” Jordan shook her head. Her forehead crinkled the paper. “Then again, maybe I am. I should be the patient instead of the psychiatrist.”

Erica laughed. “Will you stop worrying? I told you, everything will be just fine.”

Jordan raised her head just enough to look at her friend. Yeah right. “How many people do you think are going to read this ad? How many people will actually take it seriously? Damn, Erica, what kind of woman hunts for a man by taking out an ad in the newspaper, especially in my profession? That’s what people are going to think and don’t say they won’t.”

Erica shrugged her thin shoulders. “You’ve been hurt. People will understand…at least the right people will. And I don’t think you need help. All you need is—”  She bit her bottom lip and drew her brows together.

Jordan straightened and looked at her friend. “What do I need?”

The corner of Erica’s mouth lifted into a smirk. “It’s like I told you before, all you need is a good romp in the sack. That will cure all your problems.”

“Oh Lord.” Jordan rolled her eyes and thumped her head back on the table. Pain exploded like a cannon in her skull. She yelped.

Erica touched Jordan’s head. “Are you all right?”

“I will be after my head stops pounding.”

Erica chuckled and scooted across her seat. “I’m going to get our drinks. What do you want?”

“Nothing. I need a clear head to finish the work day, especially now that I’ve seen the havoc you’ve caused.”

“Okay, no vodka. How about soda and water?”

“That’s fine.”

Jordan worked her hands between her head and the newspaper and massaged her aching skull. How could it have come to this? Sure, Erica was only thinking about her, but an ad in the newspaper? Oh, God! Still, desperate times called for desperate measures. Didn’t they? She’d been without a man since Kenneth left. Kenneth, the man she thought she’d spend the rest of her life with. The man who broke her heart when he married her wealthy stepmother. And now they were coming for a visit. Like she wanted to see him. No way she’d let either of them see her without a man.

As much as she wanted to yell and cuss at her secretary for placing the ad, Jordan had to admit hiring someone to portray her boyfriend wasn’t a bad idea. Especially since she was running out of time.

Humiliation spread through her at the thought of Kenneth discovering how much he’d hurt her two years ago. Especially after he laughed in her face and told her she’d never have another relationship. Then again, he always thought he was God’s gift to women. Oh how she wished her stepmother hadn’t gone against her advice and married the jerk anyway. Not that she blamed her stepmother. Kenneth had been so conniving and convincing. It made Jordan ill just to think of it.

A warm hand touched her shoulder, before the intoxicating scent of male spice lured her from her thoughts. “Excuse me, miss. Are you all right?”

Why did everyone ask her that? She huffed, ready to give the stranger a set down if he thought she was an easy pick-up, and raised her head. She sat up, turned toward the intruder, and opened her mouth to speak. The words got lost. It took a minute to remember to breathe.

Absolutely gorgeous!

His freshly-shaven, square jaw emphasized his slightly pointed nose and highlighted a beautiful smile. Dreamy! Sexy! Even in the smoke-filled shadows of the bar, Charlie’s Passion, his dark hair grabbed her attention – cut short and slicked back, just the way she liked.

His eyes hypnotized her. Because of the shadows, she couldn’t detect a color, but it was as if his wide, radiant eyes saw right through her. For a moment, she caught a glimpse of a wild wolf lurking in their depths.

She shivered and blinked a few times to see if the image disappeared. Was she dreaming, or was there really a man so incredibly good-looking, so incredibly sexy in this bar?

“Miss? You all right?” he spoke again, mentally shaking her from her stupor.

She nodded. “I was just…hmmm, well…” She glanced down at the wrinkled paper. “I was reading the paper.”

His smile widened, and he slid into the seat beside her. His eyes drifted to her head. “With your forehead?”

She chuckled and rubbed the still smarting tender spot. He brushed her fingers away. Heat from his skin pierced through her like a lightening bolt.

“There’s something on your forehead.” When he leaned closer, his rock-hard chest bumped her shoulder. Warmth spread through every limb right down to her toes. His raspberry colored tongue peeked over his lip, just as he slid his thumb across it. When he lifted his hand to rub off the mark, she couldn’t take her eyes off his face. The liquid heat on his thumb burned her skin like molten lava, making her insides tremble.

“The paper left its mark on you.”

She swallowed hard. Not just the paper left its mark, so had he.

 

To purchase paperback – http://www.amazon.com/Man-Hunt-Phyllis-Campbell/dp/160154085X/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1242579622&sr=1-1

 

To purchase ebook – http://www.thewildrosepress.com/the-man-hunt-p-1185.html?zenid=aae33f247ae3870c9a0b1ce2796d1450

 

Or at Fictionwise – http://www.fictionwise.com/ebooks/eBook85315.htm

 

~~Vixen Phyllis~~

 

Another Vixen Mary Wednesday

July 8, 2009

Let’s talk contests. Not those given by authors, like our scavenger hunt, etc. Writing contests when you send in anywhere from your hook to 25 pages. Judges look them over and the top three or four, depending on how the contest is structured goes to a final round judge, usually an editor or agent.

The RWA Chapter I belong to has the Heart of the West contest going on right now. We’re in the judging process. The chapter coordinator and judges really donate a lot of their time to make our contest a success.

Are they worth the time and cost? Has anyone ever received a contract from winning a chapter contest?

Whenever I enter a contest it seems that one judge loves me, another hates me and one just doesn’t really care. Therefore I’m always in the middle of the pack. And a lot of times the comments are questions that had they been able to read further into the book would have been answered. I mostly write suspense, that’s the category I enter. As a suspense author I want the reader to wonder and question. Usually I can not use the suggestions in a helpful way.

My questions to you are:

  1. What do you get from a contest?
  2. Have you ever won and did it result in a contract?
  3. Do you feel they are worth your time and money?
  4. Do you find them helpful in rewriting and editing your work?

I’ll check back to see your answers.

Thanks

Welcome to Open Mic Tuesday – Karoke for Authors!

July 7, 2009

Welcome to our first Open Mic Tuesday where you — the author and reader — get a chance to sing about your books and favorites!

Where:  Right here at The Vivacious Vixen blog:  http://vivaciousvixensofromance.com/

  

When:    Starting Midnight Tuesday, July 7 through 11:59 PM Tuesday night (July 7).

 

What:     Answer our three questions and post 3-4 lines about your book (one book per post). If you wish to run an impromptu contest you can add 2 additional lines about the contest.

 

Who:      Authors who want to give us a blurb about their books and Readers who want to sign an author’s praises — yes readers, you too get to have your turn at the Mic.

 

How:      Any time after 12:01 Tuesday morning look for our Open Mic post and enter your comment with this post!

 

Your questions for July 7 are:

Cat or dog person

Favorite color

Best number

 Enjoy! We will!